I appreciate your feedback, but I felt I wanted to write this article becuase of the fact that I had got the ROI before I had even completed the course. That is a huge motivator for me to keep going.

As I explain in the article, I would take one of his tactics and use it on my next article. Then learn some more, and then write some more. It's a work in progress.

I think one of the things Ayo often says is don't wait for it to be perfect, hit publish. This is my hit publish after completing the first part of the course. And maybe there will be a part two when I have finished part two and the more advanced writing training.

So I will be putting my burger back in and will finish it off.

I do appreciate your input.